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Tuesday 14 April 2020

Fovrote food game.

Hi bloggers what are you doing in your bubble today? Today I am writing a story ok well I finished the story. The story was that you had to  describe my favorite food so have a look at the story and write a comment of what you think my favorite food is and I will make you a comment  to say that you got it right or wrong.  Hear is the story. Have a good think. Bubble time you latter.


It has delicious cooked fish. It has amazingly cooked prawns. Mum makes creamy sauce. It has hard boiled eggs. It has tasty peas. It has creamy smooth mash potato. When it comes out of the oven it is sizzles and it would be good for a dinner party.

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1 comment:

  1. Allan Robertson20 April 2020 at 10:28

    Hi Stella

    I enjoyed reading about some of your favourite foods. You have used some great adjectives. Thank you for putting so much effort into your writing.

    So now I have a little challenge for you regarding adjectives. When I go to the food technology class with the Year 7 and 8s the teacher asks the children not to describe their food using 'opinion words.'

    She means that is is your opinion if something is 'delicious' or 'amazing.' You need to add it was 'delicious because....'

    On the other hand it is great how you have described a 'creamy sauce.' That is not an opinion it is a description. Well done.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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