and made a book called Mirror in the attic. Go and have a little read . Bubble time you latter. Bye.
She had found it lying alone, deserted, abandoned in the attic. After making the discovery, Ariel had gazed and marvelled at it for some time. Where had it come from? Why had no dust settled upon it, as it had done over everything else that resided in her attic? A layer of the thick dust blanketed the attic floor, and as the sunlight glared through the attic windows, the dust particles yet to settle were illuminated as they hovered in the stuffy air. Yet, the mirror looked flawless, untouched by age, not a finger print in sight.
Ariel propped the mirror up against one of the thick, timber beams that jutted from the attic floor.
Settling down into a comfortable position, she tentatively placed a finger against the glass…and discovers that her finger was still going through the mirror. She noticed that she could walk straight through the mirror. So then she did as her right foot left the ground of the attic floor she fell straight down the mirror and she landed on a big golden rock. She soon noticed that her surroundings were crocodiles and big birds with sharp teeth flying right at her so she just jumped into the swampy water. She knew the crocs could not swim so deep. So she then swam so far down that the crocs could not keep up with her. Airel then was having a hard time to breath she was about to swim up to the surface but then a goldfish swam up to her and the goldfish touched Ariel on her hand then Airel spun in one circle and woosh she was a goldfish and she did not have to go up to the surface to breath she could breathe underwater like other fish. Ariel could now go anywhere to explore the freshwater. So then Ariel went down even further and she found this underground fish city. So then she explored the fish city then she saw a big hole with her attic in it so she said goodbye to the fish city and went to the big hole and then she was home in her attic she did not tell anyone about the magic mirror. The End
Hi Stella,
ReplyDeleteI'm one of the lucky ones that got to see your book in book creator. It looks awesome. I wonder if you could use screen castify to show your blog readers the book? Well done for continuing the story and making sure you had included many relevant details.
Mrs Taylor :)
Hi Stella I am Alvin from Rimu classs I really like your blog your Story sound very intresting and it is like a Adventure story. It seems like you have put a lot of effort into it. Did you think about adding some pictures and next time space your writing out so it is easyier to read. but apart from that Great Job!
ReplyDeleteHII Stella, You know me it's Renae in Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI love your story.
Maybe next time in your Story you can check your punctuation.
And check your spelling for you introduction.
Maybe at the end of your blog you can say by and ask questions.
But Besides that Awesome job Stella
How what your Quranatine?
From Renae
Hi Renae
ReplyDeleteNext time I will check my spelling and the same with my punctuation. Thank you for the reminder. My quarantine was great because I would getv covered in soil and mud. How was your Quranatine? What did you do? From Stella You old friend.
Hi Stella my Quarantine was good Because I got to help with the horses and see my cousins more.
DeleteSee you tomorrow.
From your Favorite Friend :)