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Wednesday 21 October 2020

Moment in time writing

 Kia Ora bloggers today I rote a moment in time write. We had to describe a old room. I found finding interesting words. A few days ago  my teacher told us to use  thesaurus.com  if we needed help to find some adjectives. Maybe you could try. It really helps sometimes but today I did not need to use it.  I think it will really help you with your writing to make it more exciting. Have a little read if you like. See you in the next post.                   From Stella                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               I am standing  in the middle with my short t-shirt and sharts.’’ Why did I choose  shorts it is freezing.’’ It is clammy and cold. It put me in a chilly pischon. I can see a gloomy staircase  staring at me just like a  creepy man.With staring cold blood eyes he looks like a character from a horror movie. The doors started banging open and closed like three is a ghost. It smells like sweet fresh yummy apple pie, The chandelier is filled with dark,gloomy, gross spiders. It swings back and forth. Bang!!! Bang!!! The next Day


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