Kia ora
Bloggers today and the last week or so my class has started our speeches.
Mine is about how and why to be cybersmart. I am feeling nervous because year fives need to have their speeches to be 1.30 or 2.00 mins but mine is 6 mins long.
My really awesome teacher Mrs Taylor is helping me with making my speech shorter. I could not get rid of anything because I love all of it and it was hard. I am getting more nervous by the minute.
I love love making and thinking about my speech. There were other options like why you should go to Yaldhurst Model school. How you see the future. They were only two of the cool and awesome speech ideas. I choose to do How and Why you should be cybersmart because I thought it would be the easiest one to write about and I was very right because I am finding my speech ideas easy to think about.
My best friend Bridie chose to write about the future me. I am nervous about my speech because I do not know who will like it and who will not like it and why they do not like it.
We are doing speeches because it is a formal piece of writing and to see if we can perform a piece of writing. I told my mum and my dad all about my cool and awesome speech because I wanted my mums help to see what I could improve on and what other things I could add into my speech.
Are you nervous if not how are you feeling?
What is your speech about. Have a look at my introduccion below and what could I improve on.
Blog you later.
Kia ora I’m Stella and I believe that being cybersmart is helping us to keep safe online. What is Cybersmart? How can this help you? Where can you find out more? Well you are in the right place to learn all about this. Come closer to hear my amazing speech all about the joys of being cybersmart. I will be discussing how to stay safe online, how to keep all your ID safe and how to stop you and your family members from being hacked. So let’s start.
Bloggers today and the last week or so my class has started our speeches.
Mine is about how and why to be cybersmart. I am feeling nervous because year fives need to have their speeches to be 1.30 or 2.00 mins but mine is 6 mins long.
My really awesome teacher Mrs Taylor is helping me with making my speech shorter. I could not get rid of anything because I love all of it and it was hard. I am getting more nervous by the minute.
I love love making and thinking about my speech. There were other options like why you should go to Yaldhurst Model school. How you see the future. They were only two of the cool and awesome speech ideas. I choose to do How and Why you should be cybersmart because I thought it would be the easiest one to write about and I was very right because I am finding my speech ideas easy to think about.
My best friend Bridie chose to write about the future me. I am nervous about my speech because I do not know who will like it and who will not like it and why they do not like it.
We are doing speeches because it is a formal piece of writing and to see if we can perform a piece of writing. I told my mum and my dad all about my cool and awesome speech because I wanted my mums help to see what I could improve on and what other things I could add into my speech.
Are you nervous if not how are you feeling?
What is your speech about.
Blog you later.
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