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Thursday 27 September 2018

t3w 10 writing

This week I have been writing about a boy called Levi please read, comment and enjoy! 
 
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3 comments:

  1. Miss Walters28 September 2018 at 13:52

    Hi Stella,

    A great story here, well done. You have capital letters on all the names of your characters, which is awesome! Make sure that you have illustrations next time to keep your reader interested even more! You can use shapes on google slides to make brilliant colourful illustrations for your story!

    From Miss W

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  2. Anonymous26 October 2018 at 18:07

    Hi Stella,

    Great work on your story and everything else. I like how you have added detail in all your blogger work. Keep up the great work on blogger. Ka-pai

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  3. Anonymous12 November 2018 at 14:50

    nice stella.

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