Kia ora bloggers today I am going to tell you about my cool story called Treasurer. Have you read it? It is by Sarah Black. It is about thes there boys and all they do is watch movies eat poto cips and burp. There dad was a very hard worker on the farm but soon... have a read down below. Blog your learning Bye
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. In 2021 I will be in Year 6. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas
Wednesday, 19 August 2020
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Hi Stella, I really like your story about the three boys. and that they were lazy and that the father passed away, and that they were mad and after seven weeks it growed. and I really like that you have put lots of darshan in your story, but I have qwstion how did the seeds get on the ground. grow? I love the way that you have seat the story it is very beautiful and colorful I love the way you have said part one two and three from Bridie
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