I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. In 2021 I will be in Year 6. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas
Thursday, 27 September 2018
t3w 10 writing
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Stella,
ReplyDeleteA great story here, well done. You have capital letters on all the names of your characters, which is awesome! Make sure that you have illustrations next time to keep your reader interested even more! You can use shapes on google slides to make brilliant colourful illustrations for your story!
From Miss W
Hi Stella,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your story and everything else. I like how you have added detail in all your blogger work. Keep up the great work on blogger. Ka-pai
nice stella.
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